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August 16, 2012
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Aug 16, 2012, 2:13:09 PM
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So here she is. My day 23. I'm not really sure what to say about this one. I guess I never really am. Those chains were sooo heavy though! I had to have my brother help me set them up and get them off. If he wanted to he could have left me and I would have been stuck. haha Enjoy! :D
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I think this is a very interesting piece. It has such an amazing idea. This girl (you) is literally being weighed down by time. Those chains do look extremely heavy!

So how you got all your ratings:

Vision: I gave you 5 stars in vision because you had such an amazing idea and you very easily created what you saw in your head for others to see. Not always easy to do, so good work.
Originality: I gave you five stars here as well becuse this is something I have never seen done before and you executed this very well.
Technique: I gave you 4.5 for technique because it was quite well done, but I find the wrinkles in the sheets to be somewhat distracting. I understand that you don't have a professional studio seeing as you are only 14 so based on what supplies you do have you did well, just something to work on. Also the little piece of metal by yourleft elbow is slightly taking away from you, so I would see about removing that as well.
Impact: I gave you five stars for impact because you really did impact me. This picture has so much emotion in it and you gave it a wonderful title as well to stimulatte the thoughts. Very nice.

It's not very often a piece makes me stop and write a critique, so good job. Overall you have a very wonderful piece here and I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)
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=OldSchoolHipster Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This will get the judges attention
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*Simply-Smiley Oct 11, 2012  Student Photographer
k.
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~kristasart Aug 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow cool.....and interesting!
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*Simply-Smiley Aug 17, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you. :D
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~kristasart Aug 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome :D
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and following is my guess.....
is he forced to get up to work?
cause now I am like the guy wake up every morning by clock..... and I am sick of that.....
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~Mefero Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohh la la, those chains are indeed heavy. Haha :D:D
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*Simply-Smiley Aug 17, 2012  Student Photographer
Yes they are. haha
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~Contradictory55 Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Woah. Actual chains.
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*Simply-Smiley Aug 16, 2012  Student Photographer
Yup, Actual chains. :D
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